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Old 15-08-2007, 11:55 PM
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Default PROGRESS (need critique): "5678" round II
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I played around with this a little more. Tell me what you guys think. Its not complete yet... im missing the cherry on top... you know? HELP!

Then I tried it dark...


This one was just fun... he he.
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Top one's the best out of them all, I don't like the white lines on top of the man I'd prefer him in the front I think.
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I don't like the white "explosion" on the top or its re-iteration in the last.

Its not that its a bad idea, it just looks low resolution?, A bad base to start with (just the explosion, the rest is spot on)
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I think the bottom one is the best. Well it catches my eye the best.
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I like how the bottom one looks like a BFG blast from doom.
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Old 02-10-2007, 01:23 PM
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the first one seems that bit clearer
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i like the middle two
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the last one is my favourite, well done, nice work :)
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I don't like the white "explosion" on the top or its re-iteration in the last.

Its not that its a bad idea, it just looks low resolution?, A bad base to start with (just the explosion, the rest is spot on)
Agreed.
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i do not know what on earth this is or what it is for, but it looks great to me - more subtle goings-on in the black space? Top one is best in my opinion.
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