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Old 12-08-2007, 07:26 PM
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I am working on my site also Mitchell Eismont and would like a crit if anyone has any time. It is still under construction so some of the links may not work.
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Old 12-08-2007, 08:01 PM
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I think your print work is nice, but I'd get a decent professionanl looking site as I'm not digging the one you've got it doesn't do your work justice
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What do you mean by "professional looking?"
Thanks for the comment.
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In all fairness it does say

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This site is under construction
But I like your work but yeah get a site that shows it off a little better, navagation could be a little better. Nice photography work there
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What do you mean by "professional looking?"
Thanks for the comment.
The first thing I notice is it's not centred, if has a distinct lack of text and didn't grab me how a design site should
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I'd agree with Laura, your work is good but the site isn't showing it in its best light...


The page changes were a little slow too here
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Love the statue of liberty piece of print work - its a shame you can't view it at a larger scale though...
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Old 12-08-2007, 11:09 PM
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Thanks James, I am going to work on getting enlargements up sometime this week.
I won an art competition with that piece.
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This website idea is based on my resume, which is an 8 page mailer and at the back is an old library sleeve with my business card in it.
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Old 12-08-2007, 11:11 PM
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ohh and thanks everyone for the comments, much appreciated.
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