This is a discussion on little illustration within the Graphic Design & Web Design Critique, edited...
Last edited by MRH; 30-08-2012 at 08:55 AM.
I like it all apart from the black flowers around the outside, they don't really fit the rest
There's a lot of dissonance in the composition. Because the leg in front is so open and wide, it's the only place I want to look. Then because the leg points down...I'm pretty much done.
If you can add a little more detail into the front leg I think it will help your piece out more because it's too much a center point.
And I agree about the flowers. Not because they don't look like the others but because they spread where a viewer is looking. It's as though the art is in quadrants.
Great art uses a rule of thirds.
i see what you mean about the front leg, i really didnt notice thanks for that!!!