little illustration

[MRH]

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[Leanne]

I like it all apart from the black flowers around the outside, they don't really fit the rest

[Cwilk]

There's a lot of dissonance in the composition. Because the leg in front is so open and wide, it's the only place I want to look. Then because the leg points down...I'm pretty much done.

If you can add a little more detail into the front leg I think it will help your piece out more because it's too much a center point.

And I agree about the flowers. Not because they don't look like the others but because they spread where a viewer is looking. It's as though the art is in quadrants.

Great art uses a rule of thirds.

[MRH]

i see what you mean about the front leg, i really didnt notice thanks for that!!!

[Rich]

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What is the concept?