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This is a discussion on Logo Design Help within the Graphic Design & Web Design Critique, This is basically were I am at with this logo. I already submitted the final copy to my client but I think it could be a little bit better. If I make any changes I will send him the new files. Any comments would be ...


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    This is basically were I am at with this logo. I already submitted the final copy to my client but I think it could be a little bit better. If I make any changes I will send him the new files. Any comments would be appreciated. Please don't be afraid of offending me.

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    Not sure the letter spacing on the tagline is really adding to it, have you tried tightening it up a little?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Toon View Post
    Not sure the letter spacing on the tagline is really adding to it, have you tried tightening it up a little?
    I have not tried that yet. I will see how it looks tighter. I often tend to put too much kerning.

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    Sounds far-reaching but I see a male protrusion first.

    It's nice and clean overall but the shape ruins it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cwilk View Post
    Sounds far-reaching but I see a male protrusion first.

    It's nice and clean overall but the shape ruins it.
    Definately phallic!

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    I like it... did you try using a different font for the strapline?

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    what's cnc? there are 3 parts to this logo and they don't seem to go togeather... did they play madlibs when creating the copy for this??
    website | not a website

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    Quote Originally Posted by rossable View Post
    what's cnc? there are 3 parts to this logo and they don't seem to go togeather... did they play madlibs when creating the copy for this??
    It is a CNC router company. They are only marketing on router web forums so they really did not need the logo to be self explainatory.

 

 
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