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Old 10-08-2007, 02:45 AM
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Default My entry for a national scion contest, C&C welcome

This is my first post, ive been photoshopping for seven years or so, off and on. this seems like a real nice place and ill prolly be here for a while. :D

Ok, Here is the down low, my brother has a racing team in florida, and they needed a design for a scion to be sent in for a contest and myby be picked it took like 12 times of emailing him the picture and re-doing some things till it finally worked, heres what i did to this original picture.


i raised the fron t air dam on the bumper, took all the words and sponcers off, chenged the color of the car to the color and type of finish they wanted. Changed out the rims, added the brakes the wanted, i couldnt get the stickers off the windshield, so i had to find another picture of a scion close to this angle and resize and skew it, i added grill mesh to the holed, added tubing in bumper changed color of tubing to red, added an intercooler, took off the antenna, added a jinsoku logo form their site, took out the background, and other stuff i cant remember, if you notice anything i forgot, lemme know,

tho it never won or anything, i would just like some, suggestions on how i couldve made it better, or any comments in general, took me like seven hours or so at the computor over a span of a few days, there was a deadline.

PS. heres my attempt at headlights on
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Old 10-08-2007, 03:52 AM
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i like it
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Old 10-08-2007, 01:25 PM
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i think you should brighten up the car or darken the wheels. something looks awkward there. other than that it's nice.
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i think you should brighten up the car or darken the wheels. something looks awkward there. other than that it's nice.
Yeah, other than that though it's pretty good. Welcome aboard!
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Old 10-08-2007, 02:32 PM
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very nice, welcome to GDF
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Old 10-08-2007, 03:54 PM
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very good welcome aboard
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Old 10-08-2007, 05:16 PM
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Nice - welcome
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Old 10-08-2007, 08:17 PM
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i think you should brighten up the car or darken the wheels. something looks awkward there. other than that it's nice.
Agreed, you have to liven it up a little bit, it's too bland.
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Welcome aboard!!! Nice PS work. Is there a reason that the art is flipped on the door? I can understand the hood, but not the door.
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Old 12-08-2007, 04:30 AM
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thanx guys, the bkg wasnt supposed to look real, and the original pic had nuthin to do wit me/ lol, no idea about the door/
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