Logo Critque

[Justinfh]

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On another forum, somebody asked me what this company is about so I'm posting the info here. Three Amis Productions is an entertainment company founded by three friends. They specialize is producing sci-fi and drama productions for both TV and the Web.

For this logo, the company wanted me to put the company name into the logo, and they wanted the logo to be a circle. So anyway, here are just two designs. I've created more, but I've ended up going back to the drawing board.

[Justinfh]

First dumbass mistake, is that I didn't proofread. Oppies!

[Toon]

The kerning needs looking at

[tim]

I'd say the font and the kerning needs looking at

[rossable]

the font, kerning, and iconography needs looking at.

[designjunky]

Sweet jesus.

[Drummertist]

Holy....ahem....s—so...um....what software was it made in?

EDIT: If I'm gonna be a part of this forum I don't need to post mean like I did above. Here's my real critique:

Why are the circles not perfectly concentric? It's very, very, very gray and doesn't need the gradient on the outside circle. The iconography in the middle is generic and uncleanly drawn (like the jaggies in the roman numerals near the corner...why?). The text seems like generic times new roman. Why not go for something more fun?

Here's an idea for you (just spit-balling): a film reel. It's a circle shape yet it also says something about what they do. Do some research on what makes a good logo (Here...this might help: http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2009...e-logo-design/ and http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2009...n-logo-design/).

[Ecom Rider]

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Also the uneven stroke doesn't look right