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[jani]

Hi,

I want to share my work in this forum. Please take a look.



I was free in my office so just took this product and designed a brochure kind of thing for it. I asked this product's owner to show it on the internet or not but they didn't reply. So I am showing it to you friends and waiting for your comments.

Jani

[Toon]

Nice gentle grads I like it

[ianm]

not too keen on the mirror effect on the text and the blocking thing in the bottom left hand corner (blue background) is awful

[jani]

Originally Posted by ianm

not too keen on the mirror effect on the text and the blocking thing in the bottom left hand corner (blue background) is awful

I don't agree with you, infact many others will also don't agree with you. I have shown this design on many other forums and have got real nice comments about it and you are the FIRST one who disliked it. I don't know if you are commenting seriously or not but this is something which was not expected at all.

[ianm]

i'm sorry, just my opinion

[Carrotnapper]

Originally Posted by jani

waiting for your comments.

Jani

dude, you asked for some crit, he is entitled to his opinion! why ask if you can't take bad crit?

[SatanicPenguins]

Its complete garbage ;) LOLOLOLOLOL

Plus its common sense.

(its alright though)

[Starscream]

Originally Posted by Carrotnapper

dude, you asked for some crit, he is entitled to his opinion! why ask if you can't take bad crit?

a very well put post.
good stuff

[Starscream]

Also, no offense but if you have gone and posted this image on many other design forums? but perhaps you know it's good. and now your just fishing for comments?

[Cwilk]

It's actually not a bad ad, but there's too much blue, so I have to agree with Ian on this. If you could tie in the rose color to another area, I think that would give it a little more umph. Maybe use the blocks in the lower left to gradiate from the pink?