Rate My Tourism Brochure!

[kvnrthr]

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I made this three fold brochure for a school project. Keep in mind that I am only a student, I am not a designer, I am bad at designing and I came here to improve.
So please don't hate on this too much, be harsh if you have to, but please give tips! Help will be appreciated! Thanks :001_tongue:

[Toon]

I think the margins around the edge could be impoved slightly

[kvnrthr]

Yeah, I guess those margins are a bit messy.
What do you think about the color and the thickness of the margins?
And how would you judge the brochure overall?

[The Simulator]

As Toon said, the margins need sorting. The colours are a bit bright in my opinion, I would be tempted to soften them a touch and use more pastely colours. Also, change the heading font. Papyrus is a horrible and overused font.

I like the image choices, nice variation in there.

[designinark]

I would change the font also

[elky]

I agree about the font Papyrus - I can't stand it. Also your margins definitely need sorting, you need some more space between the text and the edge. Have you considered using a 'typophoto' perhaps incorporating the text within the images themselves? You have used a different font for the contact us page, this looks a bit strange to me!

[Jamie Lucky]

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Fonts, Colour and Padding all need looking at