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  1. 12-08-2009, 02:01 PM #1
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    Hey guys,

    Thought I would show you this advert i made. I'm really not happy with it, but i dont know what to do :( it doesnt sell the product well at all, and it looks crowded.

    I cant take any of the information off as the client has specified that text.

    Any thoughts??




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  2. 30-07-2012, 12:34 PM #2
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    WHY would you dig this thread up for no reason??? :(
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    I've seen it a few times, it keeps popping up in the related threads list, maybe it's because no one replied
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  8. 31-07-2012, 07:04 PM #8
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    Top quality! Thank you for bumping this thread Kelly...
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