Web Design - Critque needed!

[spark]

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Hi,

Im working on a new look for my site - so far im just playing around with ideas in photoshop.. attached are screenshots for the 3 pages involved in the site.

My main concern is the colours, i like them - are they too 'harsh'?

I sent the images over to a friend (and fellow designer) and the feedback was that the lime green and pink on the contact page was 'a bit much' and that the you cant really see the { .. } as well as you should.. but it looks fine on my monitor so i was wondering is it that it might just look different on different monitors..?

All help appreciated,

Thanks.

[jonze]

I like it

The only parts I have issue with are the logo on the left seems too big, and I don't really like the taped on paper on the left. I think I'd like it better if the tape and paper was a bit less flat, or if you made the yellow rectangles come out of the side of the main part the way the Web and Print ones do.

[spark]

Thanks..
Looking at it now i think your definately right about the logo - it really does look to big!..I might try play around with some ideas for taped paper at the sides too...

[jonze]

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No problem!

Did you make that Mish-Mash poster? I really like it!