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This is a discussion on Web Design (just thrown together) within the Graphic Design & Web Design Critique, Hey everybody! New to estetica. Client is a model /production/actor who is in the fashion industry. This is a preliminary for general layout, I would like to know what you think? Thanks! full image: <a href='http://img19.imageshack.us/i/picture4htu.png/'><img src='http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6952/picture4htu.png' border='0' alt='Image Hosted by ImageShack.us'/></a><br/> Imageshack - picture4htu.png...
Hey everybody! New to estetica. Client is a model /production/actor who is in the fashion industry. This is a preliminary for general layout, I would like to know what you think? Thanks!
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Last edited by zucc; 11-06-2009 at 09:52 AM. Reason: image.
yeah I didnt realize. Here is the larger view
From the time I was eleven I've been into designing websites.Now I'm eighteen years old and looking into pursing web design as a career.I'm not stupid,I know that what I know about web design now isn't nearly enough to get a job with.I'm planning on either going to college or taking a course on web design,but before I can make this kind of choice I need to know.
Last edited by StiligeCecilie; 16-06-2009 at 11:17 PM. Reason: Removed linky
I think it's a bit over-done. The main gallery section looks fine, but the framing silhouettes lack relevancy and detract from the images of your client. The blue boxes might work better in a more subdued tone. The numbered boxes should be closer to your main content area to balance out how close your banner is to main. Also, the "J" of Jillian is a bit muddy. The last name is a lot clearer.
Hope this helps.
Diana
I like it! But I do agree with the J is a bit hard to read and needs to be cleaned up and moving the numbers closer could not hurt.
Thank you for the great suggestions! I will have to post the updates as soon as I get them done.
why do u tell us that its just thrown together? if ur implying that this was effortless to you and that ur not proud of it then why even post...
i cant stand when people say that kind of stuff....weather it took 5 mins or 5 hours , its your work and if u dont like it u dont have to post it ..
The design is very simple if ur client was happy with it then so be it ....but i see nothing that catchs my eye.
when ppl look at ur work they do not care how long it took ...its a minute detail, what matters is final project.
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