check on my site, you can be harsh as long as I can be better

[Jasper5844]

ok it is Savingourdreams.com it is like a portfolio or showcase of my work...but for now I'm more focus on the portfolio itself...EVERYTHING is of my creation. So critique critique CRITIQUE be harsh, be mean if you like lol, I just want to know how I can improve. THANKS!

[LeadMagnet]

You don't want us to be harsh with this one, trust me.
Scrap it and start again. Pick a colour scheme and style everything including your links. Especially on pages like this where it blends into the background.
Your front page is also empty for some reason.

[Arkady]

You said you wanted harsh, so here it is. Unless you have posted this as a joke, then you have absolutely no graphical design instincts whatsoever. Give it up; find another hobby; don't upset yourself. It's not something that anyone can do. There are things that can be learned, certainly, but you do need some basic talent for it and I'm sorry to say, you haven't.

[Noli]

Sorry matey you cannot improve on this in any way, you need to improve your skills unfortunately... or as Arkady mentioned: maybe find another hobby ;)

However I still believe this posted as a joke!

~Peace~

[prewe]

However I still believe this posted as a joke!

Yeah I think so too. However it's one of the ugliest sites I've seen.

[bartoszdesign]

this must be a joke.

[strev]

Only the generous use of the sublime but fine font; comic sans, (throughout your entire site) could possibly help to bring to jolt it back to life.

[ronmcbride]

Ya know if you use illustrator cs4 they have this thing called color selection to help you with keeping color in check, you might want to give that a try when you layout your site.

[prewe]

Ya know if you use illustrator cs4 they have this thing called color selection to help you with keeping color in check, you might want to give that a try when you layout your site.

illustrator shouldn't really be used for making website layouts. sure, you can use it, but i wouldn't understand why

[ken_mcbain]

Even the flash object you've made, you didn't effort?

When the mouse is over the button (previous/next), it should be a hand pointer! (check movie clip properties..)

I doubt you understand the codes on the sliding effect of your flash...