please be NICE>>>

[scottace]

website showing some work of mine>>>
www.pencil2paper.com

[kip]

some pretty interesting work, I struggled a bit with the site though to be honest, welcome aboard

[jameson]

It would be way better without the splash page, in my opinion.

[scottace]

splash paGE>>?do you mean the first page ..?

[MeganS]

No offense but what's the point of posting in the critique forum and saying 'be nice!' If you don't want criticism then don't ask for it :\

I think the site is a bit confusing, you have a splash page which is unnecessary, and then the coloured 'links' at the top aren't links? I think it might be good to actually organise your work a bit better rather than just colour coding random images. Like what if I just want to view your illustration work? It might be better to have proper headings or something. Also, work like the snowboard shop design thing is a bit... meh. The felt-tip pen marks don't really make it look very professional or anything.

[Toon]

I'd called it more art then design, the pieces although very interesting don't have much of a message or meaning I feel

[scottace]

thats good>the critizam i mean>>i was actualy joking about the be nice thing as the one before mine said No need to be nice>>>oh well my british sarcasim humer is lost on some people>>>

[jameson]

Originally Posted by scottace

splash paGE>>?do you mean the first page ..?

Yep, that's the one. These days it's more fashionable (and functional) to just go to straight to the content.

[MeganS]

scottace get a clue honey, most people on this board are British.

[scottace]

lol>>sarcasm..?
thanks 4 the reply tho>>>