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Old 01-12-2008, 02:01 PM
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Default please be NICE>>>

website showing some work of mine>>>
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Old 01-12-2008, 02:09 PM
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some pretty interesting work, I struggled a bit with the site though to be honest, welcome aboard
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It would be way better without the splash page, in my opinion.
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splash paGE>>?do you mean the first page ..?
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No offense but what's the point of posting in the critique forum and saying 'be nice!' If you don't want criticism then don't ask for it :\

I think the site is a bit confusing, you have a splash page which is unnecessary, and then the coloured 'links' at the top aren't links? I think it might be good to actually organise your work a bit better rather than just colour coding random images. Like what if I just want to view your illustration work? It might be better to have proper headings or something. Also, work like the snowboard shop design thing is a bit... meh. The felt-tip pen marks don't really make it look very professional or anything.
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I'd called it more art then design, the pieces although very interesting don't have much of a message or meaning I feel
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thats good>the critizam i mean>>i was actualy joking about the be nice thing as the one before mine said No need to be nice>>>oh well my british sarcasim humer is lost on some people>>>
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splash paGE>>?do you mean the first page ..?
Yep, that's the one. These days it's more fashionable (and functional) to just go to straight to the content.
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scottace get a clue honey, most people on this board are British.
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lol>>sarcasm..?
thanks 4 the reply tho>>>
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