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Old 13-11-2008, 03:49 PM
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Hey guys,

What you think of this effort?

LogoSauce - Lifebloom



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The mark seems a little big compared to the type to me...
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I might have to work on some colour schemes to give it a bit of depth...

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Its nice. What about making the border of the icon the same colour as the fill.

And how about turning it into a tree?
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I like your font, but like others I think the icon needs a little something more.
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Same as above. I really like the font treatment a lot actually. Maybe try simplifying the icon even more, like less lines on the inside. Maybe try changing it from a circle to a fluffy cotton shape?
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Same as above. I really like the font treatment a lot actually. Maybe try simplifying the icon even more, like less lines on the inside. Maybe try changing it from a circle to a fluffy cotton shape?
Yeah I personally hate the logo at the moment!! Arggg I am working on a completely different concept, more simple and direct!
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I think the border on the ring seems a little too heavy, maybe just take it down a bit
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Better?

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