The Worlds End

[SugarSpunSister]

Hardnan, some advice...

You will never ever get anywhere taking your ideas from other people, its pretty impossible. Instead do some rough sketches of your own then ask us for some crit. It is geting increasingly difficult and very very tedious to keep coming up with ideas from you and your extremely vague descriptions of what you want. If you really want to make it as a designer you'll have to start coming up with ideas yourself, nobody will be there to hold your hand in the big wide world.

Get a sketchbook and start drawing, its a good way of collecting ideas and shapes for future reference.

[cenadmusic]

Originally Posted by cenadmusic

my first attempt....



i see what ya mean toon..

here is my second attempt..

i went with a more bleak design on my second one..
i thinks thats what i was thinking when i chose the thin font for the first one but maybe i was expecting people to read into it too much..

but thanks for the critic anyway..