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Old 06-09-2008, 06:20 PM
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any thoughts of improvements to this?

http://www.logosauce.com/logos/29420

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I like it :)

Maybe a color contrast would be nice?
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thanks :)

yeah i see what you mean. ill give that a wee shot and see how it looks.
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yeah more colour contrast from front to back.
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Old 07-09-2008, 02:58 PM
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a few different ideas. Definetly right about the colour contrast :)

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What about a different color on the heart and on the text? I like the red/yellow combination :)
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I like the layout of the 4th design, but not sure about the orange...
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could you try one the type of number one with the ident of number two?
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thanks for the suggestions. I'm quite drawn to the bottom one, but the colours of the pink/purple one go quite well too. Not sure if its too feminine though. hmmmm.
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Definately the teal coloured logo for me (3rd one down)!!
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