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Old 23-08-2008, 12:42 PM
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Hey All | This is the first attempt at some personal logos. As may or may not be able to tell, my initial are A.A. Tell me what you think.








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Old 23-08-2008, 02:11 PM
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Is definately a unique mark, which might be nice with some colour, but if you want it to represent 'AA' it doesn't work for me.
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I like it I think it looks like a rams head :D
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I saw your second attempt, but I like this one better. It's doesn't immediately read as your initials and that's ok with me. It indicates your ability to abstract ideas and create a strong impact. I prefer the third option. I'm thinking if pair it with the round, lowercase type as you have on your portfolio cover, the mark will read more as stylized initials.

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the 'aa' is not clear at all but as a mark the solid black could be used to solid effect. I'd suggest using with your name as an ident until it's established.
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Old 23-08-2008, 07:59 PM
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Thanks for the feedback everyone. I'll keep at it...
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