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Old 22-08-2008, 11:07 AM
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These are two logos that I did for systems here at work. Note that I don't work for a web or graphics design company or anything like that. These logos I created for two new mobile phone typle payment systems, the website needs to have a logo so I knocked these up.

They won't be changed or anything, and don't have to be professional since they are probably only going to be placeholders. That said, there is a light chance that the India one will actually be used. The product is called M-Paisa in India and M-Pesa in Egypt.

Anyway, with all that blurb and rubbish out of the way, I just wanted to see what you guys thought of them. Please be gently.

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Old 22-08-2008, 11:10 AM
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The top ones pretty good but I don't like the bottom ones. Flimsy, different font would be better and get rid of the shadow
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Old 22-08-2008, 11:18 AM
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agree with Kelly, the top one is a good start

The egypt ones look a little weak, did you consider doing a similar one to the india one for egypt but using just one pyramid with the m- on instead?
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Old 22-08-2008, 11:19 AM
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Ta, yeah not sure why I put a shadow on, I don't even like it!

Hmmm, no I didn't, I might give that a go actually.
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Old 23-08-2008, 10:04 PM
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I quite like the India one! But I agree with the others - the shadow doesn't work on the bottom. And papyrus is a bit overused. Try using the same general idea as the India one - that would be great to branch off of.
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Old 23-08-2008, 11:26 PM
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^Your knowledge of font names always impresses me.
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