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Old 21-08-2008, 10:18 AM
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Default Gaming guild website ..

This is a website i've made for a gaming group i'm a part. It had been quite a while since I had done anything web related, and I know that the coding is FAR from being validated and probably has a ton of stupid mistakes i'm not aware of in it.. but i'm also far from being a professional in web design & HTML.

I'm looking for a bunch of people who can judge the layout and give me feedback or hopefully great advice on what I can possibly add/remove. Thanks!!

Calamitous Intent - A Warhammer Online Guild

PS: The links at the top aren't working yet.
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Old 21-08-2008, 11:26 AM
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I like it, although I find the main font hard to read. A bit small?
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Old 21-08-2008, 11:29 AM
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You know, i've never really even noticed that - Thanks!
I've probably been looking at it for way too long.
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Old 21-08-2008, 11:31 AM
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You know, i've never really even noticed that - Thanks!
I've probably been looking at it for way too long.
Yeah, it's a good idea to take some long breaks in the work prosess and then look at it later with "fresh eyes" :)
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Old 21-08-2008, 12:30 PM
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Although I have no clue about gaming, it definately is a good start! As cecilie has already mentioned, if you make a feature of the logo I think it will definately be a good improvement
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Old 21-08-2008, 12:55 PM
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good attempt

definately look at resizing different elements - and work at getting the site fonts to look in sync/ balanced
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Thanks guys!

I'm definately gonna take your input!
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Old 21-08-2008, 09:28 PM
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Looks legit. I would make the text font a little larger (already mentioned) and not bold. that way you can bold things when you need to. Maybe make Calmitous Intent a little larger / on the left? I'm sort of used to seeing things that way, the header just looks a little empty. I mean, it looks sick, but just think of sizing like a pyramid. Most important = biggest, then next biggest, smaller, etc.

I think it looks nasty.

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Thanks Matt.. i'll give your advice a go tonight when i've got the time and we'll see how it looks! I never heard the pyramid analogy, thanks for clarifying.
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