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Old 18-08-2008, 09:46 PM
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Please critique my web site and blog. IF you like the blog keep coming back i just got a few new writers for it and we are going to be releasing an e-magazine.

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Old 18-08-2008, 09:53 PM
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They look decent.. some minor structural damage though:

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Yah i know i need to go fix all of them just don't have the time right now on the next re-design i will fix all those.
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Old 18-08-2008, 09:58 PM
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Nothing tells a potential client, "I'm a quality builder"... like 29 errors
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tommy has a point.....

you can't say ' i am great at web design' if you own site fails on the very things you're trying to prove you're right. The design is nice enough though - fence is a bit much mind...
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Yah i am working on the fence i am creating a vector fence with a nicer background.
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If you want to have a blog that will appeal to other designers, you need to give your own design a little more attention. The menu is a great opportunity ;) as is the sidebar. Right now it just looks like a slighly modified wordpress theme, which isn't going to inspire much readership. Don't let any this feedback discourage you tho, take the time to get your site up to your highest standards. Its worth it for many reasons.
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I'd encourage your to consider the advice given above.

Also, I hope you're going to change the bird from the Partridge Family logo.

Best of luck,

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I believe its supposed to be a Finch.. hence mFinch co

I thought the overall size of the identity looked a little small and out of proportion.
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I understand it's supposed to be a finch, but it looks an awful lot like the one on the far right...

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