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Old 17-08-2008, 05:37 AM
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Hi, I'm working on a Logo for a Brand of Temporary Apartments for rental Buenos Aires, called AlohaBaires. Give me ideas please.



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Old 17-08-2008, 03:21 PM
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The i and the r need spacing correctly
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Lose the blue background and glow off the tower. Align the type together to the left. I would then maybe try to add a bit more detail / colour to the tower graphic if possible?
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It could just be an optical illusion but is the tower leaning to the left?
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It could just be an optical illusion but is the tower leaning to the left?
No it is definately leaning to the left. Needs to be straightened. I think that there's too much empty space too.
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Old 17-08-2008, 05:57 PM
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Thanks, I changed the Background. Realigned the tower. Put a spacing beetween r and i.

Don't know what else to do.

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The shading seems a bit squiffy under the h and the a, I would sort that out.
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Is it always going to be used on that background?
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Is it always going to be used on that background?
You can always suggest anyone :)
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well, is it always going to be used on the same coloured background that is picked at this stage?
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