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Old 15-08-2008, 04:26 PM
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So I have decided to save up some money and invest in flash.
I was looking at some cool flash sites today and i decided once i learnt how to use all the awesome flash stuff i would build a basic flash website.
I decided that i was going to make a portfolio.

So even though this will probably never go ahead i designed a template.
I would much appreciate your views on it.

I was going for a basic and neat but yet proffesional look.


Please Note: It isnt the final product yet ;P
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not bad, it is definitely a good start..if you keep at it editing it making it better more stylish etc find out what people like and add it....unique is always good...:P
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^^ Yeh i posted it here so i could see what to add.
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It's tough because a working site might come alive, a picture of a site is always going to look pretty flat and won't have any function
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Just a few suggestions, as far as colors / concepts are concerned. Your site is Casa Verde, but the main layout is gray + blue. Why Casa Verde? I would imagine that GREEN would be a more prominent color in that case.

Also, you have Blue, Green, Red, and Orange all on the same navigation. I think it's kind of a neat idea to have different colors for each section, so it adds to some sub-conscious organization... but they should all fall into some sort of color scheme. The colors you have there are all really strong, and conflict heavily with one another. Take a look at this color wheel and you may get some ideas.

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Also, there is a bar above the navigation with seemingly no purpose. Why is it there?

I think you've got a good start, I'm just trying to stir up some more ideas.

Good luck.

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That bar isnt actualyl there. it appeard when i uploaded the image. and casa verde because my surname is green so i lvie in the greenhouse :P
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casa verde because my surname is green so i lvie in the greenhouse :P
Thats cool :P

I think you should go with that theme a bit stronger.
And I agree with mattpowers, the navbar colors are a bit icky, you should work on that a bit more :)

Maybe work on a entirely green based color scheme?

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