Is that "eau" as in water in French or is that initials? If it's the word, I'd tighten up the kerning on example one. If it's initials, I'd use all caps.
I'd say your solution is somewhere between the two examples. I like the height of the first and the stroke width of the second.
That said, the "a" in both examples are trouble though. Particularly in the second one is a bit too abstract to say "a" in this context. The first looks a little too much like a backwards "6" to my eye.
Also, I'd drop the heart, unless there's something, um, adult to modeling involved.
Hope this helps,
Diana


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