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Old 21-07-2008, 09:26 PM
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I'm designing a business card for myself, would appreciate some feedback.

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Old 21-07-2008, 09:29 PM
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That's very stylish Vicky, could you bring the leading in a little on your details so there's a little more spacing at the top and bottom of the box? Just my first thought
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try that pink strip in the same colour as that red in the center of your orchids, it's looking very nice though :)
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Old 21-07-2008, 09:31 PM
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Wow quick response, thanks guys!!
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Old 21-07-2008, 09:34 PM
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it's all part of the service ;)
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not sure I'd have put my number on here.. you might edit that out

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Old 21-07-2008, 09:40 PM
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funny, didn't think of that!
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nice colors. i think the logo is too big though..
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call me boring but i wonder if it would look good on just a plain white background. mite be quite nice when its printed with a glossy face.
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hi, looks great, maybe just try the stripe as a 3rd gradient of green, then you might pull more attention to the flowers (only other color)
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