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Old 08-07-2008, 07:31 PM
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Default Younggold.co.uk Teaser

Not Sure if this is the right place to post or not, Still trying to understand my way around :P. so apologies if i post wrong :s

This is a Teaser for my new portfolio that should be launched soon, hopefully depending on whether im busy or other things get in the way.

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Old 08-07-2008, 07:34 PM
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Looks great to me, can't wait to see the showcase rotating, it should look brill
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Old 08-07-2008, 07:38 PM
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Looks great to me, can't wait to see the showcase rotating, it should look brill
Thanks Lilliya i did work hard on this: i forgot to mention the hole site is coded from html and css The only parts i did not create are the flash galleries.
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looks nice. I think you can omit 'not winners' just the fact you submitted (but don't say winner) should say it enough without going to far...
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Looking good
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Looks great. I love the rotating gallery!
But I might suggest that you carefully look over the writing on the site before publishing it. Maybe even have someone else read over it just to be extra careful. Things as simple as run on sentences and lowercase 'i's in the middle of a sentence can distract from your awesome work! :)
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Old 14-07-2008, 04:18 PM
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Great advice thank you so much :)
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In ur signature you say you 14. The site is great but never mind that at 14 i wouldnt expect anybody to have a portfolio :O but the site looks fantastic well done.
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Old 12-08-2008, 06:21 PM
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Why thanks...Well i mean im making a portfolio but it does lack work to show :/ hoping to change that soon.
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Also can i ask are you definatley going to do this or is it just a design you made?
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