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Old 04-07-2008, 10:43 PM
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My first thought was "hey where is the navigation". My only other thought was to pull the colors together a little more.

Grey + Purple = okay
Grey + Red = okay (though maybe a little devilish?)
Grey + Purple + Red = contrasting a little too much for my taste.
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its nice, im not a fan of the black boxes containing the right content, would maybe have a slightly darker shade grey without the drop shadow?
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it's nice. try upgrading it more.
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I like what you have done with the gray background, and agree you should choose either red or purple. The black boxes dominates the site, meaning the cool graphics you have done with the background gets a bit lost. I don't like the headings very much, I would stick to having them bold without the gradient.
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How is it now???
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The black boxes still dominate the page a little bit. Try moving them below the header so you can see the fancy design. This will also help to fill the currently empty lower right 1/2 of the page.

Maybe it is just me but the site seems a little wide. How wide is it?

One last thing. I'm not sure if English is your first language, but you definitely want to check spelling and grammar. If you've got the resources have someone proofread it and make the corrections.
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I think those boxes on the right are still overpowering... I would also remove the dark pink graphic from underneath, as it isn't really serving a purposes - and ins't clear what if it is meant to represent something or not.

Other than that, I think its definately getting there
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Much better but agree with the others, move the black boxes down, and try to change it to transparent?
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Much better but agree with the others, move the black boxes down, and try to change it to transparent?
the black box is actually gray in color. I already make it transparent.

maybe i should change the color of it, any suggestions??
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