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Old 08-06-2008, 11:33 AM
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Hi all,

I'm currently working on a site for a personal trainer I know and I have just finished the first page.

Just wanting a bit of feedback as to whether you like it or not, what I should do different or add in the design and code.

I don't mind you being harsh as long as its constructive please.

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Old 08-06-2008, 11:44 AM
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I quite like the site the only things that would concern me is the type looks slightly large for my personal taste and the logo could do with some work, it stand out a mile on what is otherwise quite a nice site layout.
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Old 08-06-2008, 07:18 PM
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I like it

wouldnt mind seeing you invert the body n city line from black to white and then having the text black... your girl image will then also blend in nicely etc...
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Old 08-06-2008, 07:38 PM
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If that's a picture of her, sign me up...
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I like the look and the lady, When you press the accessibility button, it pops up behind the image and i cant get rid of it or read the main content.

Is that just for me?
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Old 08-06-2008, 10:58 PM
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Your meant to click back where it say accessibility for it to go away.
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Old 08-06-2008, 11:08 PM
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Cant click back and it still scrolls behind image making it look like an error to a visitor because now i cant read the content. Lets say i click that by mistake, Now I'm left not able to read the main content. my next step is leaving the site....

Just a thought,
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Old 08-06-2008, 11:10 PM
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I see, in firefox its fine, but im using ie7 and its not right.
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Old 08-06-2008, 11:14 PM
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ok macca cheers for the heads up
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i'm with zumo...
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