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Old 25-05-2008, 12:12 PM
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Hi everyone,

Please can you all cast an eye over the front page of my home site www.ticklefishdesign.com . Any advise good or bad would be welcome.

I'd like to find out if the look resembles what I'm after?

1.Clean
2.Simple
3.Easy on the eye

many thanks,
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Old 25-05-2008, 12:30 PM
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Looks nice and clean to me, I love the colour scheme, not sure about the logo....



Seems the text is missing and the icon isn't evenly spaced
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Old 25-05-2008, 01:15 PM
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As well as that logo, the black seems a little too heavy handed to me....
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Old 25-05-2008, 01:37 PM
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I think there's a bit too much whitespace in there.
Also, as a general rule, don't let the browser resize images
http://www.ticklefishdesign.com/tick.../ktuk_site.gif
It looks really nasty. Shrink them and make some thumbnails using photoshop instead. For images like that, you should be using jpg not gif. Gif looks nasty and dithered because it doesn't support the same colour range as jpg.
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Old 25-05-2008, 03:41 PM
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Yes this is an issue...



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OOPS !! Didn't see Toon's post before mine. And yes I agree about the Gif's too.. I should really read all the posts first..
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Thanks for all your replies, this is really helpful. I'll look over then and make some amendments and we'll see what you think again after that.

Many thanks again,
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I've changed the logo and heading position and i think it works fine now upon resizing of screen, the thumbnail images I've created in photoshop at that size and changed from .gif to .jpg and they look alot better and are smaller image sizes. also the plain black #000000 has now been changed to a slight gradient from a lesser black into a Grey type.

I think all of these changed have helped, and its thanks to your critique, any more comments are very welcome.

PS. the white space issue will become better once all the content is there, I'm still writing and re-writing the content.

Thanks again,
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Old 25-05-2008, 11:21 PM
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yep.. thats a bit better. And thanks for keeping nice tidy clean & valid code as well
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Yup, kudos on the valid strict-y goodness. The design, I'm keen on. Keep us posted.
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Much better, well done.
You've got the right base, valid code, improving nicely. Don't be afraid to experiment.
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