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Old 22-05-2008, 03:26 AM
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I created this logo because i was bored. First creative thing that has come to me in months. Let me know what you think.
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mmmmm if you dropped the grey and green bits, we might be looking clearer, or at least the text on these parts... I'd say your text is a tad small though - hard to read even on the big one... Think about the typical size that a logo might appear...
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Good start. I Like th concept, I feel like the cirlce should change other than just colours. You have them overlapping maybe have them actually effecting one another.

I think maybe you could have your name outside of the circles or over all of them some how, It feels a little like you just do web design and someone else takes care of the rest.

I like the blue for your graphic but I am not a fan of it behind your text. And I too think that the text could be a little larger.

I think your concept is clean and cool. Just some minor techincals to fix. Good job.
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there is just too much wasted open space that is not adding value to the logo. I think you need to tighten up the design just a tad.
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Old 23-05-2008, 01:51 AM
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Thanks i will repost when i have taken the suggestions into consideration and fixed what i thought needed fixed. Thanks so much.
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