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Old 20-05-2008, 04:49 PM
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... LOVE UNLIMITED DESIGN

I just posted this in the advertising section. Would be interested in some sort of feedback though...
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Old 20-05-2008, 04:51 PM
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Some really nice work I love the Bamboo Nightclub one
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Old 20-05-2008, 05:15 PM
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seems good...
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Yeah, some very nice stuff! It looks like the jpg at the top, with the copy and your logo, was compressed too much, and now looks pixelated. Maybe re-save that image at a higher quality?

Nice work!
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I'd also have that text as a non image if pos, since search engines can pick that up, and also other readers...
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I'd also have that text as a non image if pos, since search engines can pick that up, and also other readers...
Too true. Much better than an img.
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Old 20-05-2008, 06:10 PM
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I quite like your thread title. And I REALLY like your portfolio. I love the header, but as someone mentioned is does seem to be a bit blurry, and I (and most others) like things to be as sharp and clear as possible. Very impressive work though, like the set-up of your portfolio, and but when I click on the thumbnails of your work, I can't see them bigger by simply clicking them. It goes to a new page but never seems to load... ? I just right clicked them and opened them in a new browser and then they showed up. I love all your work though, your use of color is great!
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Old 20-05-2008, 07:10 PM
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I think your work is great. I like the style of your site and that it is clean and direct, but still maintains a good dynamic appearance with images.

I do feel like there should be something more substantial about the work and the designer or team, to it but that may just be me.

Some really great pieces in there.
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I like you as a person. (I totally just topped all compliments on this thread).

Seriously though, very nice work indeed!
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Thanks for the feedback. It's nice to hear something other than "Can you make the drink promos stand out a bit more" from time to time...

Susanna - if you let the page load fully, clicking the thumbnails should open the full size image - it can be slow because I'm on a cheapo server for now. But your patience will be fully rewarded...

The jpeg - I guess it does look pixelated now it's been pointed out. It's actually just been messed up a bit, to look old. But I guess on screen it doesn't work so well. I'll sort that out...
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