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Old 13-05-2008, 12:56 PM
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Im working mostly with layout and that kind of stuff so im toying around with some branding/logotypes etc. Well any pointers appreciated.
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The black sparrow cards look great
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Thanks Toon, anything i can do to improve it?

I want it too look as good as possible in the viewers eyes, so it fits with the rest of my portfolio. As i said branding is definitly not my strong side.
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yeah liking that sparrow one.. only thing might be lining the text on the BC with parts of the logo to baseline...
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I don't like the internet traffic one at all it's seems a bit weak
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Thanks, yea, i think it may have come out a bit too busy.. My basic idea was the stats in the background and the eye symbolizing the supervising of the stats.
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I enjoyed the sparrow one as well. The only thing I can think of is on the lighter, blue or gray one (first one on the left) the sky blue "sparrow" doesnt stand out that well. Maybe a darker gray would work better. Looks good though!
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