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Old 09-05-2008, 08:12 PM
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Any thoughts on this mark?

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I'm wondering if it's not clear enough to define the letters?
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Old 09-05-2008, 08:14 PM
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I think it's very designer for a typical logo but reading the brief it's probably ideal

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Could even be classy, classic or elegant. For obvious reasons, the text must be ultra-legible, whether large or small. Text rules but feel free to include an icon. I prefer a rectangular shape. Consider sturdy, dark, interesting colours. Avoid blue and anything cute. Must look good when people print web pages in black and white.
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Old 12-05-2008, 05:08 PM
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Looks good! Definitely the strongest one there so far.
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love it..not sure of the brief, but it's a well done logo toon.
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Mmmmmm I can see the p/f issue - would adding an extra stroke into the gap make the right hand side of the P and the left hand side of the E work?
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Would adjusting the value of the first "p" help with the "e" readability?

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Old 14-05-2008, 09:39 PM
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The E isn't really legible. It's much wider than the Ps. Doesn't look like it's part of them.
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