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06-05-2008, 03:44 PM
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first entry for cirtique
This is the first time ive entered a competiton on Logo Sauce so Im not sure how its going to go down.
But anyway, heres my quick work done for the Mono Software Competion Link To My Logo C&C appreciated please! Phil
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06-05-2008, 05:51 PM
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I like that. Only two points of note:
1> the placement of the 'software' - it seems to be vaguely lining up but not. I'd go for the centre line of the two 'o's which would just mean a little adjustment but nothing radical. 2> the text on software. It's nice but the 'a' and 'r' and perhaps a little too similar. I'd either manually adjust one or other character or change fonts...
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07-05-2008, 11:13 AM
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I am with zumo on the R & A thing, difficult to read so change the font, other than that I think it looks good.
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07-05-2008, 02:45 PM
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Yeh, Iagree now that youve pointed out the mixture of the A&R. Thanks,
I'll try and have a fiddle before tomorow!!! haha Phil
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