New Updated Website

[dkedar]

Dear Friends

I have Launched my Personal Website Few days before and now I have updated my Website's Theme

Please send Comments for more Progress

URL: http://www.proplusdesigns.com


Kedar Datar

[zumojuice]

Ok firstly check your text:

Welcome. A bit about myself. I am Kedar Datar Web Gui Designer(.) Having 5 years of active design experience under my belt(.) I use this part of the web to exhibit some of the work I have created.

That's 3 easy problems I've spotted in that first line alone. People can generally forgive you for one or two mistakes over the whole site but that's one line! Gui should be GUI or people might get confused.

It is also Optimisation (for the yanks, a 'z' there instead of the 's')

In your folio, you have Servient like 6 times for different pieces. I'd just have it as one entry and the allow people to see the different parts you've worked on for it.

Overall the design is neat, if a little flat to be honest. Try something to catch my interest when I arrive.

Hope this all helps.

[dkedar]

Thanks, Friend

I accepted your suggestions, and I will correct those


Thanks
Kedar