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Old 01-05-2008, 12:10 PM
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Hey, guys,
i need you're comment about the following logo's:
This is just a sketsch, i know letters aren't perfect positionated and that the collors don't look good and that thinkness of lines aren't that weel, but this is only to know in witch way i better go farther..

It is a logo for a advertising agency.

colours i will look for later, when the form of the logo is finniched.





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The 1st one is my favourite. clear . easy to read. and stylised.
the others look a bit fussy.complicated

Nice work :)
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Number 6 and number 8 are the ones for me, some of the first ones it doesnt seem obvious that some of the 'marks' or 'logos' are letters.
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The 1st one is my favourite. clear . easy to read. and stylised.
the others look a bit fussy.complicated

Nice work :)
Yeah. none of them really jumped out at me. A few are very hard to read. I like the first and last one.
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1st for me I think
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I think 2 and 8 are your strongest. 2 needs a better font for "rtuel"
but the weight and balance feels the strongest to me. 8 is almost good to go, nice lines, just a little heavy on the left maybe colours will balance it out.

Good work, all of them are well done.
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I like the direction of 3 and 8.
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3 and 7, 7 being my favorite of those two. I really like the flow of the font choice for both. Also, I like the juxtaposition of the flowing font against the modern square font.
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1st and 2d look fine to me.
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1st one is good only small error in connecting streak....else its good
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