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Old 30-04-2008, 02:57 AM
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hi, jus wondering wat u think of my logo i did for an art project that i need to redo. i thought adding a gradient mesh would help. wat do u think i need to do to make it look more professional? please give all opinions.
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the icon has a good starting point but the typography needs alot of work
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Yeah the logo for MP3 could be less squashed, and I'm reading Mp3's as "MP3S"
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Gotta Say I'm not feeling it. The concept is kinda cool though. you might start recreating it from scratch. The line width for your arrows could be thicker or thinner. there needs to be some kind of focus to where you want people to look first and then follow a path through the rest of your design.

Start with a really cool 2 or something and work out from there. Try using 1 font only.

I like the colors but maybe use colors either more somewhat analogous or that are complimentary.

It will get there, good Idea.
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Different I like :) I think the weight of the record and MP3 should balance each other out in space relation inside the arrows.
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Different I like :) I think the weight of the record and MP3 should balance each other out in space relation inside the arrows.
yeh, i thought about it. like makin the mp3 more round.
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I think the MP3 font and its letters positions aren't matching with the logo design, the arrow shape can be drawn in a better way to describe the logo better, and give the impression of a logo design.
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The s on "CDS" and "MP3S" needs to be lower case.
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