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Old 01-05-2008, 10:27 AM
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Old 02-05-2008, 09:44 AM
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Default 2 colour schemes....like- dislike


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Old 02-05-2008, 10:19 AM
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1st one is the best. Not sure about the gappy text it looks very off
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You now have a good hierarchy for your text and your site in general. You are still tracking out your lowercase letters, which makes it very difficult to read. Here is a book that will give you some tips on typography. Read it and stop stealing sheep!

Amazon Online Reader : Stop Stealing Sheep & Find Out How Type Works (2nd Edition)
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I like the actual graphic design, however the typography is not up to par with it. I think you should justify the column text and lower the letter spacing on the head lines, I would also consider changing that neon green to some color that match better aswell. The Links up top could be made more interesting.

Other then that, good job.
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Old 06-05-2008, 12:37 PM
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Thanks for webdingo..i have made a few changes since I posted the graphics.

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