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You now have a good hierarchy for your text and your site in general. You are still tracking out your lowercase letters, which makes it very difficult to read. Here is a book that will give you some tips on typography. Read it and stop stealing sheep!
Amazon Online Reader : Stop Stealing Sheep & Find Out How Type Works (2nd Edition)
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I like the actual graphic design, however the typography is not up to par with it. I think you should justify the column text and lower the letter spacing on the head lines, I would also consider changing that neon green to some color that match better aswell. The Links up top could be made more interesting.
Other then that, good job. |
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