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Old 30-04-2008, 08:37 AM
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Type is a little better, but it does not it me as much as the image. perhaps play with the important parts of this and create a hierarchy:

I imagine When, Last Time, This Happy, are your most vital parts?
What do you mean by "create a hierarchy" Richard?
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Cheers toon...ill haver a gander...

how are you anyway ?
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Good Thanks, really busy. I opened a new site last month and I've got more work from it than expected which is a good thing I guess.
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Old 30-04-2008, 09:22 AM
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Thats good to hear..
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Old 30-04-2008, 10:44 AM
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ok changes made to text....

and i will re cut and place the main image..
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Old 30-04-2008, 11:19 AM
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-Ok All New-
lost the dots gif....created borders to define columns...

what do you think ?
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For the lazy people like me who can't be arsed to navigate to the first page

I still don't see a great definition of type hierarchy
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Further updates..
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Maybe you could try a varied use of fonts for headlines etc. Look at the font usage on alistapart


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