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Old 25-04-2008, 12:47 PM
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Hello all,

I'm Launching my Logo Design Website soon and would love to hear feeback from everyone... All opinions welcome...

Thank you! :)

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Old 25-04-2008, 12:55 PM
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The site design is ok, I quite like the soft tones of blue, not too sure about the font used on the testimonials though it looks odd. The code is a mess, you should raelly think about trying to put your css in an external file and stop using tables to build layouts.

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Is a great place to start. As for the actual content, I would think about hiring a logo designer as the logos on the site are really poor, I know you're only selling them for $50 but they are of such a low standard I doubt you'll sell many.

Hope it helps, welcome aboard
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Thank you, I'm glad you like the tone of blues... :) I may look at another font for testimonials as for the logos, seems you were hard on my logo work? I do have watermarks all over them so you don't see the full quality standard and steal them, why would someone hire a logo designer when I designed XOOii and the logos myself and have many happy clients who buy my logos and praise the high quality... I think It's your preference as I do get alot/many sales for these type of logos privately, so why not launch a service eh? ;) Sorry for being critical back about this, but seems you doubted wrong. I do appreciate the other points you made, I'm going to go try a couple things...

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I changed the font on testimonials to arial, seems much better on the eyes... :)
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I have to agree with the above the web design coding looks like it was done in 1998. If you're going to run a sucessful business learn to be professional in all aspects. The logo's are very ameturish, have a look at some of the worlds best logo design portfolios and compare them to your's you will see how poor they are.
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I have to agree with the above the web design coding looks like it was done in 1998. If you're going to run a sucessful business learn to be professional in all aspects. The logo's are very ameturish, have a look at some of the worlds best logo design portfolios and compare them to your's you will see how poor they are.
Hi, I really didn't hear much critique on the website but flame on the logos, I looked at some of the top logo designers, I'm not here to discuss business... As some of the top logo designers charge $150 - $500+ for a print ready logo... I'm providing affordable, web ready, high quality logos. I do have some very good logo design partners coming on to xooii in the near future that will be providing more choice and higher priced logos... Much more work ahead... :) Thanks
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love to hear feeback from everyone... All opinions welcome...
To be fair, if you don't want to hear people's critique's or opinions... don't ask for them?
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Your exactly right. :) I should have been more specific on the critique I needed... If I needed business critique, I would be in another forum... hehe

I'm looking for my website graphic design critique, I'm not a coder/css'er, I will though look at finding one in the near future though...

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