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Old 24-04-2008, 11:45 PM
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Umm, your design is flat-lining... I am not sure that is the way to go. Good progress though, Much better choice in font.
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Very nice. Your type needs to be a little bolder though. Give it a bit more breathing room too, both kerning- and leading-wise. And don't get too close to the red line or the box.

Looks good.
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Umm, your design is flat-lining... I am not sure that is the way to go.
This is a pretty good point. Might want to show the client with and without the red line.
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Yeah, that true. Font and line parts. I still find paddy's logo that big stronger at the mo though..
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K, I'm off to tinker with it more. Thanks all!
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