Possible Logo Work

[blueocto]

Nice one paddy

[SidekickWD]

I see what you're saying Paddy, the line by itself does lose impact.

[Seedy GD]

Sorry About it but, I perfer both of paddy's to what you have.

I find that your choice of Capitals and small caps to be a weak design and I think that you could choose a more interesting font.

Having the line reversed out makes it look much cleaner and has better focus and balance.

[SidekickWD]

No need to be sorry at all! That's why I posted it up here. I've read and paid attention to how all of you help and critique other's work, and not once have I felt you all went overboard or made un-needed comments.

I appreciate the help and advice here. So thanks you all!

[SidekickWD]

I think I'm getting closer. Paddy, I really liked your concept with the line reversed, so here's what I have now,



eta: I still don't like my font, I'll work on that later today.

[philjohns]

make the laste wave join the straight red line a little smoother and I recon its nearly there! Im liking it!

[SidekickWD]

K, I feel pretty good about this one

[james]

Originally Posted by SidekickWD

Thank you all so much for you input, you've given me some great direction here!

James, yes I am using Ai.

Ah i just wondered with the effects, thats all. Looking better now though

[zumojuice]

watch how close you under copy is coming to your red line.

[SidekickWD]

it did get a little tight there