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Old 20-04-2008, 08:05 PM
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hello everyone, just wanted to show you this logo i did for a friend of mine.

what do you think,criticism please
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Old 20-04-2008, 08:53 PM
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yeah its an interesting concept. although, as the title of the site has psp in it, shouldn't the icon be more of a psp than a tv with a ps controller?
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Old 20-04-2008, 10:18 PM
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I agree. Instead of a tv and controller there should be an actual psp
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What ever the ident is, make it a little smaller so it's not quite so close to your letters or at least equal it out on both sides. The bit on the 'c' is smaller than the 'm'
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I'd agree with these comments too. This may just be me, but I think I'm getting hung up with the font choice. It looks to me like a default Helvetica, or something. San-serif is a good choice, just maybe not this one.
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Old 23-04-2008, 05:20 PM
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I think that the concept is great, but I think you are having some issues with your execution.

The site is green and black, your logo doesn't fit with the page at all. Also you are playing psp games on the computer...why do you have a tv? I may be missing the connection. And to finish I think that you need to work on your type choice and setting.

I think with the concept you have it won't take long to make some changes and come back with another version, but I think that as is it is lacking professionalism.
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1) the website is absolutely irrelevant to psps.
2) the site design is soon changing.
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