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Old 15-04-2008, 07:57 PM
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If you can tone down the violence then it will be great.
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Looks good, Toon! Nice color scheme, very clean. It would be nice to see a little blue in there maybe, to offset all the orange.

The only suggestion I have is the direction you take the viewer. Starts with the image on the left (of course) then to the Integrated Labels title, read the subtext there and then I move straight down to the benefits before reading the information to the left below the image (Integrated labels in business...). You are taking us in more of a circle than a traditional left to right. More of an observation, than a need to change, really, unless it's not what you intended.
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The Design is just about finished on this now, just completing the text. Remove the Spider no index tags today.

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nice site and nice colour scheme .. i like the label effect on the UK bit on the title, good work xxx
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The slideshow is a nice touch
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