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Hi again. So I made a few changes to my site, and am ready to hear what you all have to say about it. The only thing I ask is to please have constructive comments.
The last spot I asked to take a look at my site seemed to thrive on how mean they could be without actually helping me learn anything. One of my favorite things about this site is that you all truly seem to want beginner designers to learn. So hear it is.... My Site. And is it normal to still be learning so much and doing biz as a designer at the same time? It feels so strange to me. Good, but strange.
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Fortune cookie says: "You will be successful, if you don't screw up." SidekickWebDesign.com |
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Zumo, thank you so much for your input. The navigation thing, you were so right! I dropped it down a bit and added a few more links to help users define it as a nav.
And yah...the whole thing was pretty friggen big. And thanks to your suggestion I discovered a new thechnique I had no idea how to do before, which led to changing the whole logo and the little blue people. Thanks Zumo, still tweaking here and there, but I like the direction it's going.
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Fortune cookie says: "You will be successful, if you don't screw up." SidekickWebDesign.com Last edited by SidekickWD; 13-04-2008 at 10:02 PM. Reason: Because I am the queen of typos |
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A little nitpick, but, I would widen the area that you have your main text
"In today's market, having a well designed web site is so important!....." To get rid of those widows (one word on one line). It just makes it more pelasing to the eye. |
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That's not nit picky at all really. I tried it and it does layout much better. Not so squished. Thanks!
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love the guy as a visual element. really adds interest for users to interact visually.
Top: Try messing around with the "Sidekick" text at the top, you may be able to get it to look a little less beveled/embossed. (that's just my opinion) Right Navigation: I love the idea of the side navigation, however in order to separate it from the rest of the page, it needs a bit of a visual element to make it stand out just a bit more, since it is to attract your clients. Maybe something along the lines of image rollover? Or just adding to the design of the table? Whatever that element may be, it'll boost your site big time. (and maybe even sales, although i'm a graphic designer, not a marketer..) PS: check your image bg results in IE as well, they seem to come out off-white.
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www.mikefortuna.com Last edited by mikefortuna; 14-04-2008 at 07:21 PM. |
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Looking good! My only comment about the main navigation at the top is to try it centered. Seems like everything else on the page is aligned to the center, and the nav bar seems to be aligned left. I'm thinking if it is centered, it might feel a little bit more cohesive overall.
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