Time to reorder my Business Cards

[DistinctGraphicz]

So, now that i'm a member of this website, and it's time to reorder my business cards, i wanted to see what other designers think of it. My logo isn't the greatest thing out there, but the more i stare at it the more i like it. It represents me pretty well. Anyway, let me know

P.S. i turned down the white outer glow already...

[Toon]

It's a nice style but it says disco DJ to me

[zumojuice]

If you simplfied it, it could work really well.

Perhaps consider dropping the backdrop (which i think creates Toon's disco feeling), and perhaps think about the logo. You've got a metallic logo, so why not think about a foil block for it over 'distinct'. It is likely to cost a little more, but may well be worth it.

Toon should be able to quote you a figure.

Also, I'd change owner to director if it's a company as it looks more professional and correct. If it is your freelance company name, then I'd consider dropping the word owner altogether..

[DistinctGraphicz]

Should it read director/graphic designer or just director. It is a business and not just a freelance thing so whatever that may mean.

Do you guys like the logo?

[lolly]

Don't take this the wrong way but text with a load of effects on doesn't constitute a logo.

[DistinctGraphicz]

It works for me. I rather that then the traditional graphic element on the left and text to the right, or graphic with text centered underneath it.

[Kelly Creative]

Kerning needs sorting, it's very poor

[Cheapliquid]

could lose the background, theres so much going on in that card.

i would just sketch up Distinct Graphics in you're own hand-made font style, and scan it up and then have ur information. thats all you need.

[zumojuice]

You might have to manually kern that in places...

[brokendalek]

Originally Posted by zumojuice

You might have to manually kern that in places...

Sounds painful :ohmy:

Seriously, I think it's a little too busy. Could do with being a little simpler