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Old 09-04-2008, 01:14 PM
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Hi all ...

This was designed using Photoshop ...

What do y'all think of it ?

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BTW, I'm sorry for the huge size, but that was kinda necessary ...
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Old 09-04-2008, 02:28 PM
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Separating content from design for a moment, your overall layout is a tad overwhelming, but that might well be the point.
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Loose the drop shadows and it will sharpen the text
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There seems to be to much going on and not sure what you are actually trying to say.

what is this for?
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Just a pointer: you need to set things like this up in InDesign or Quark rather than Photoshop mate. Your type will be nice and sharp that way
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I agree it's hard to know what the point of this is. It's offensive looking, so if you are trying to offend, perhaps you are going in the right direction.
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You're missing 1 column of pixels.
Also, you failed to get a reaction here from any of us, sorry. Try again.
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Loose the drop shadows and it will sharpen the text
took the words right out of my head.
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