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Old 03-04-2008, 09:23 AM
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Hi :) so this is may web site now is only jpg but i need your critique. What do you things?

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Old 03-04-2008, 09:28 AM
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Very interesting background, I think it will work really well
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Old 03-04-2008, 09:30 AM
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The design is really nice, but the placement of the content is off the bottom right. Which means I need to scroll down to get to see you projects. I'd perhaps bring it up and to the left some, or swap it totally around to it sits top left and the 'swirl falls off on the other side.

The 'of' is perhaps not needed before your name, it seems weird to say your interest is photography, before your profession as a graphic designer, unless this is to be a photography portfolio.
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Old 03-04-2008, 09:34 AM
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I know this is only a comping layout, but the first thing I notice, is that it doesn't fit in my browser without scrollbars ( horizontal and vertical.) I am using Firefox with 4 toolbars at a screen resolution of 1024x768. The other thing is that there is mixture of English and cyrillic spelt words (presumably Bulgarian.) All that aside, it is otherwise very different (that's a good thing,) and very beautiful.

Keep going.
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Old 03-04-2008, 09:49 AM
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zumojuice i was change my personal info.. thanks for the note

Arkady - about "mixture of English and cyrillic" .. this is only example but change it.
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Old 04-04-2008, 01:35 AM
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I like the design, just looking at it i get several interesting ideas for it jumping into my.
I agree that it should be smaller though.
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Old 14-05-2008, 12:50 PM
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so my web site is done: Portfolio of maiova

and now.. what do you thing?
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Old 14-05-2008, 12:53 PM
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That background is gorgeous. I also like the dropdowns. It's just slightly too big my screen I have a small amount of Hor scroll which doesn't need to be there. Nice work though
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Old 14-05-2008, 04:46 PM
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Nice site. The whole content on the far right throws off my expectations which is good. Although on the other side of that, people may thing it's broken or something...
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this is a really pretty site, very nice work on that background and i love the simplicity, just your portfolio and thats it :)
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