Logo Update

[PolarBear]

I changed and fixed my logo, you can see it at the location of my soon to be web page at Christopher "the creative sheep" web site .... to come!

[Liliya]

The text doesn't seem clear enough to read for a logo

[tommylogic]

it is a bit hard to read

[PolarBear]

How could I change it then ?

[Seedy GD]

My suggestion would be to pic a focal point and work from there. Start with what you feel is the most important (probably "creative sheep") and make that the clearest thing to see. Right now all i read is heep reative.

[zumojuice]

Yeah, this is a bit messy to read in many places: the main text, which clashes with your large letters; the under-text that appears almost as one line. Frankly, you last one was cleaner over all.

I also feel you're trying to add this 3D sheep, to a plain an under-developed backdrop. I'd suggest cleaning it up by making nothing overlap to start off with; play with your letterforms,shapes and elements. Perhaps a typeface that more reflects you?

[Liliya]

Simplify the sheep more, see how some of these have been done

[zumojuice]

For sheep idents, my fave has to be the Craghoppers logo. This use it really well, often the type sites on the right of the page and the ident way over to the left.

[Acuity]

some of thos examples honestly do not look like sheep to me...

[PolarBear]

Alright, I'll consider changing it as it seems a logo is plain jane, some of those logos no matter if they work, are just ugly. If plain simple jane will be more effective then I will redo.

Be back with something.