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Old 29-01-2008, 02:44 PM
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I am working on this for a new company, into all kinds of different diesel vehicles and conversions and getting great fuel economy. This is the beginnings of the website, will transfer to all print media as well. Any feedback is great, thanks!

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Old 29-01-2008, 05:27 PM
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Ideally you need to add some leading between the lines of text, they're touching
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Agree with LL.....also it's easy to see that you're designing this with a grunge type look, but I think that the vehicle needs to be seen better. And the red you've chosen (with a vehicle) says 'blood' to me...or unsafe.
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Old 29-01-2008, 08:03 PM
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Thanks for the info. I intentionally kept the type scrunched. Going for the West Coast Chopper meets rockers meets Crazy Motocross rider. Want an element of unsafe, many of the vehicles are high power, fast, crazy.
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