Another critique please!

[L[Design]]

Thanks for the info on my first post. Here are a few more samples of my work, once again, don't hold anything back.

logo_layout.jpg

[jackc4ss]

Originally Posted by L[Design]

Thanks for the info on my first post. Here are a few more samples of my work, once again, don't hold anything back.

logo_layout.jpg

Hi, I didn't see your first work but for us to critique you, it is best that you give us some information on each project, otherwise we do not know what to critique you against. :)

[L[Design]]

Ok, the first logo is for a new company that does performance work and conversions and such of diesel vehicles. The second is an electrical company, really moving in the direction of alternative energy and the third is a Church looking to show community. Does that help?

[Miss Leona]

Not keen on the thickness on the stroke of the first one, the others are ok though

[crazyleaf]

I like the third one. Great concept.

[L[Design]]

Thanks!